I see him weak, I see him hurt.
My heart feels about to burst.
I feel his pain within my heart.
And this ache tears me apart.
He doesn't know, he can not see,
How deep his pain singes me.
But he will not know, can not see,
How this ache tears me apart,
How I feel his pain within my heart,
How my heart feels about to burst,
When I see him weak, see him hurt.
©2005-2009 ~Sapphire-Rose-Wolf
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The first four lines were in my journal when I went looking through it earlier today and in 6th hour I decided to finish it. When I got half way dine I decided to do this one thing I heard about from, surprisingly, a math teacher. It was done with prose before when there were two characters talking back and forth. Basically what was said went forward and then backward. Hard to explain without and example so one to the poem!
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